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  • Hi
    Technology has exerted a positive impact on people's well-being, and nowaday it is challenging to find field without applying technological resources.Considering hobbies, people claim that they should be connected to technology, while others maintain the opposite pointview. From my perspective, I subscribe to people with the controvertial position .

  • to make an impact on
    viewpoint=point of view
    support the people=side with the people

    Что вы хотели сказать по-русски?