Проверьте, пожалуйста, текст на английском языке

  • Проверьте, пожалуйста, текст, который является изложением, на английском языке и то, как я оформил дедлайны (то есть, когда перечисляется список, может быть желательно словами написать, а не двоеточием). Спасибо!!!

    Exposition of information letter of Business Process Management (2016) conference

    The conference is called Business Process Management. It took place in Rio de Janeiro, Brazil and it was hosted by the Federal University of the State of Rio de Janeiro (UNIRIO). The conference was held from the 20th till the 22nd of September 2016 and it was organized by the scientific BPM community.

    The aim of the conference was to explore and exchange knowledge in this field through scientific talks, industry discussions, technical tutorials and panels. Researchers, including students, industry practitioners and developers could take part in BPM.

    The conference had several deadlines, including abstract submission deadline: 14th March, 2016; full paper submission deadline: 21st March, 2016; notifications deadline: 13rd May, 2016; registration deadline: 15th September, 2016. If participants had any problem, they could contact the organizers via email lavia.santoro@uniriotec.br or via telephones (21) 2530-8051 (21), 3873-4015 (21), 3873-6400.

    The conference had registration fees, that was $640 for the main conference. Registration could be payed with Visa, MasterCard, and American Express credit cards. Also, bank transfer was supported for convenience of participants.

  • Нормально.

    The conference had registration fees, that was $640 for the main conference.---The paticipants in the conference were to pay registration fees, which was $640 for the main conference.

    Registration could be payed with Visa, MasterCard, and American Express credit cards.----Registration fees ...by /from...credit cards.

  • Vitalik, большое вам спасибо!!!