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    it would be fair to pay the more higher salary to the more productive workers than the staff taking the higher positions in the organization
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    Every person strives to ensure a proper financial circumstance to the family and the relatives

  • ...a higher salary to more productive workers/better working officers than pay huge sums of money to the staff occupying the highest posts in the company.

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    it would be fair to pay a higher salary to more productive workers/better working officers than pay huge sums of money to the staff occupying the highest posts in the company.

  • Не пойму почему здесь написано his а не her Это из сайта http://ielts-up.com/writing/agree-disagree-essay.html
    Even if someone is earning a high salary, but feels tensed and compromises with his conscience, this person won’t enjoy his life. While pursuing one’s interests will always bring pleasure and feeling of satisfaction
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  • Наверное в этом моем предложении нужен другой артикль
    Every person strives to ensure the proper financial circumstance to the family and the relatives

  • the proper financial circumstance

    ---Правильно. Только что это значит?

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  • the proper financial circumstance --это хорошее бытие значит
    Я нашла это в книгах

  • Even if someone is earning a high salary, but feels tensed and compromises with his conscience, this person won’t enjoy his life

    ---Труднообъяснимый случай.

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