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    A major shop complex make a attempt catering to customers, bulding comfortable facilities entice them to attend this shop mall
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  • A major shopping mall makes an attempt at satisfying the needs of various customers because it possesses all kinds of facilities that encourage them to visit it.

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    A major shopping mall makes an attempt at satisfying the needs of various customers because it possesses all kinds of facilities that encourage them to visit it.

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    Можно с инфинитивом an attempt to satisfy...

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