Скажите, грамотно ли так построить предложения?

  • Ann, you should be more in control (self-confident)! You are beautiful and clever.
    We are now living in a separate house with a small plot of land.
    I am short of a few more hours in a day to do all I need.
    There is a heavy storm at sea. The waves are beating ferociously against the seashore. The weather is dank, it is drizzling.
    I'll call for you / pick you up on my way to Sebastopol.
    It's you who has the responsibility of feeding the cats, not me!
    It's your responsibility to feed the cats, not mine!
    We tracked along the dense forest, then climbed a rock with a spectacular view on the whole city and the sea.
    The visitors had left, leaving all the dirty dishes on the table. Ann was fed up with cleaning after them every / each time!
    She was enraged at his indifference to her wishes and problems.

  • Отнюдь неплохо, молодец.
    In a day скажем просто a day.
    Там, где есть responsibility, можно употребить прилагательное responsible It is you who is responsible for feeding the cats. Можно еще сказать The responsibility to feed the cats rests entirely with you.
    В предпоследнем предложении, там, где Ann, можно было бы сказать Every time they did so Ann flew into a rage.

  • Спасибо!!