правильно

  • все в порядке с этим предложением?

    Do you think that responsibility for using illegal content should be toughen?

  • Toughened. Это пассив. The responsibility, that можно убрать.

  • Do you think that people should me made more responsible using illegal content?
    Do you think that tough measures should be applied to those who irresponsibly use llegal content?