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  • Я веду паблик в вк по играм, и мы периодически пишем разработчикам, чтобы взять у них небольшое интервью. Я создал специальный шаблон для первого обращения. Подскажите, нет ли тут никаких ошибок?

    Greetings, <company name>! I am a journalist of the one of the biggest blogs about strategy games in Russian social net vk.com <my link>. We want to ask you some questions about your game coming out soon – <game name>. There will be about 10 or 15 questions about gameplay – this information will be interesting to our followers.

    Would you give us answers for that Q&A rubric?

    Thanks in advance
    <my name> , journalist of Strategicon.

  • of one of the biggest blogs

    in the Russian social net

    Our company would like to ask you a few questions

    The company would appreciate it if you would give your answeres for our Q&A column.

    We will be looking forward to your reply.