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  • My best trip is trip to Moscow. I liked it very much because I always wanted to see the Red Square. It was very interesting, I was there the whole winter holidays and I visited a lot of museums, cafes and other interesting places. I want to go to Moscow with my parents again and to see all this beauty again.

  • My best trip is почему настоящее, когда всё в прошедшем?
    trip где артикль?
    to Moscow. I liked it very much because I always wanted to see the Red Square. It was very interesting, I was there (during во время)
    the whole winter holidays and I visited a lot of museums, cafes and other interesting places. I want to go to Moscow with my parents again and to see all this beauty again.

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