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    Hi! I heard about Windows Mobile today, do you know anything about it?
    Yes, I do. Windows Mobile is a mobile operating system developed by Microsoft for smartphones and personal digital assistants.

    1/That's right. However, WindowsMobile is a discontinued family of mobile operating systems. After the introduction of new operating systems for iOS and Android smartphones, WindowsMobile could not match the success and faded away in the following years.
    And when was Windows Mobile invented?
    2/ Its origins date back to Windows CE in 1996, although Windows Mobile itself first appeared in 2000.
    It was renamed "Windows Mobile" in 2003, at which point it came in several versions and was aimed at business and enterprise consumers. In 2010, Microsoft stopped funding and closed the project.

    1/ The last version of Windows Mobile, released in 2010 was 6.5.5. After this, Microsoft ceased development on Windows Mobile in order to concentrate on Windows Phone.It developed by Microsoft as the replacement successor to Windows Mobile. Unlike Windows Mobile, it was primarily aimed at the consumer market rather than the enterprise market.
    Due changes, this OS was incompatible with all existing Windows Mobile devices.The restart of Windows Mobile did not help to bypass competitors iOS and Android and Microsoft ceased active development of Windows 10 Mobile in 2017.
    What were the main programs of Windows Mobile in 2000?
    2/ Pocket PC 2000meant a successor to the operating system aboard Palm-Size PCs.
    This initial release had multiple built-in applications such as Microsoft Reader, Microsoft Money, Pocket Internet Explorer and Windows Media Player. A version of Microsoft Office called Pocket Office included Pocket Word, Pocket Excel and Pocket Outlook. Notes, a note-taking app with intelligent character recognition support allowed Notes to distinguish styles of handwriting
    And what was Windows 10 Mobile like?

    1/ Windows 10 Mobile released in 2015, as an edition of its PC operating system Windows 10 which unified the experience across phones, desktops, tablets and laptops.
    Windows 10 Mobile had: support for voice input; Skype integration for phones; Action Center tablet mode tiles; a set of Microsoft’s core apps: Microsoft Word, Excel and PowerPoint. Outlook allowed you to pull through emails and calendars with a consistent user interface across all devices; Microsoft Edge help play much nicer with the web than previous versions of Internet Explorer.
    2/ What factors contributed to the fact that Windows 10 Mobile a was no longer supported?

    1/ The platform has never achieved any significant degree of popularity or market share compared to Android or iOS. By 2017, Microsoft downplayed Windows 10 Mobile, stopped active development due to a lack of user and developer interest in the platform, and focused more on servicing existing mobile operating systems.
    What was the Internet and security of Windows Mobile?
    2/ Internet Connection Sharing, supported on compatible devices, allows the phone to share its Internet connection with computers via USB and Bluetooth. Windows Mobile supports virtual private networking over PPTP protocol.
    Windows Mobile had weak security, it was not difficult to find out passwords and data.

    1/ I sorry but I must be off! See you later!
    2/ It was nice talking to you. – Good luck!