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    From my perspective, certanly a toddler should attend a kindergarden, being in different circumstance, at different time, and then overcomming some burdens , the child becomes confident in the challenging world, consiquently, this confidence would assist in aquiring knowlenge in a school
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    From my perspective, certanly a toddler should attend a kindergarden, a variety of obsticles dictate different circumstances, after overcomming some burdens , the child becomes confident in the challenging world, consiquently, this confidence would assist in aquiring knowlenge in a school
    Thanks

  • a toddler should certanly attend a kindergarden

    unfavourable circumstanes cause variousobstacles to appear

    after overcoming some on-the-way barriers the child becomes confident in the challenging world, the confidence assisting him in aquiring knowlenge at school.

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    From my perspective, a toddler should certanly attend a kindergarden, unfavourable circumstanes cause a various of obstacles to appear, after overcomming some burdens , after overcoming some on-the-way barriers the child becomes confident in the challenging world, the confidence assisting him in aquiring knowlenge at school.

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    From my perspective, a toddler should certanly attend a kindergarden, unfavourable circumstanes cause a various of obstacles to appear, after overcoming some on-the-way barriers the child becomes confident in the challenging world, the confidence assisting him in aquiring knowlenge at school.

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    From my perspective, a toddler should certanly attend a kindergarden, unfavourable circumstanes cause a variety of obstacles to appear, after overcoming some on-the-way barriers the child becomes confident in the challenging world, the confidence assisting him in aquiring knowlenge at school.